 RobertMcDade
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Date: May 25, 2005 @ 11:04 AM
Great guitar at the end...One thing though, the pauses inbetween your verses were to long...overall, not bad for your first attempt. Next time, get your flow more on point and add more punchlines, but I liked it! ~Catch ya laters~ 
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Majyk
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Date: May 25, 2005 @ 11:21 AM
lmao at the slob on my nob line! yo, for your first time ever rapping, it was unique...and i loved your beat, very creative. this was some good stuff, only one thing, your voice was not that clear, and if you would have slowed down on the lyrics, it would have been better, but this was good. nice work!
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DBEBerger
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Date: May 25, 2005 @ 11:42 AM
pretty tite! first time rappn thats even better keep it up
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 ebarbarella
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Date: May 25, 2005 @ 1:13 PM
 very cool!!  the guitar sounds good ... cool words
 IntergalacticWarHero rappin 
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YoungVoice
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Date: May 25, 2005 @ 11:14 PM
props on makin your own beat. im diggin it, may be hittin you up for one pretty soon. pretty good for your first time rappin...better than a lotta cats round here.
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onehizy
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Date: May 26, 2005 @ 7:59 AM
nice try you number 1
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JRTwine
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Date: May 26, 2005 @ 12:01 PM
GOOD good nice killed it at the end with the GA TAR likes it my friends mixed it together
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Dizeazed
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Date: May 27, 2005 @ 3:59 PM
@ "Slob on my knob!" 
As everyone has said, for your first time... it wasn't too shabby. Your vocals were a bit low of quality, so it took away from certain punches. Also, it seemed as though you were trying to force too many words into your lines. Try spreading them out more, on your next attempt. I enjoyed the little guitar solo @ the end. Keep practicing.
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 farfor44
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Date: June 9, 2005 @ 7:43 PM
I like this man Just needs
to be sharpened up a bit, and a little
more definition** minor
criticisms are mostly not worth mention
except to those who are striving for
perfection 
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 AdVirus
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Date: June 11, 2005 @ 6:16 PM
yeeeeeeaaaaaaahhhhhh 
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sqrlcub
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Date: June 14, 2005 @ 2:48 PM
It reminds me of the Beastie Boys because of the distorted guitars. I don't particularly like the rap style but you have done it pretty convincingly.
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FrozenFlame44
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Date: July 9, 2005 @ 5:04 PM
Mic check 1,1..2,2...hahaha that was funny, but good try
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PaDz
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Date: July 22, 2005 @ 4:04 PM
stay with your guitar, do not try rap ...  no disrespect. good try.
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bangsta
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Date: August 10, 2005 @ 9:13 PM
love that guitar man, stay on ya grind, haha you're a way better freestyler than me. keep it up man.
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DeadraveN
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Date: August 14, 2005 @ 10:35 PM
 ha ha ha... that scream... oh god...
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snypez
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Date: August 17, 2005 @ 2:10 PM
weak rap and lyrics but nice different beat thats from a english perspective go check mine and rate it please peace snypes
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BlueDeliverance
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Date: August 20, 2005 @ 12:04 AM
How the hell you can do an about face from Layla to rap I have no idea, but points for the try. The guitars are okay, the rapping is..okay, at best. I get the feeling you were more goofing off than taking yourself seriously, which is the vibe I get from Beastie Boys. Make those beats more prominent, rap about the middle east or something, and you'll be good.
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AbortiveMind
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Date: August 27, 2005 @ 8:30 AM
hihi when i read 'rap' i was like, man i MUST check this out   U kick ass! Very nice beat on this one hihi, and those lyrics Jezus, nice first time rappin', hell yeah  
Hahaha... that scream man, ur awesome! AND killing me
Very nice touch on it with that guitar 
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K3VIN
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Date: September 6, 2005 @ 3:34 PM
alright for a first time battle track, long pauses are harsh on its effectiveness, and the fast lines make it hard to understand, not bad though
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rico
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Date: September 20, 2005 @ 7:47 PM
not too shabby, alot of the lines reminded me of rage, just a lil bit
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goatcack
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Date: October 17, 2005 @ 12:01 PM
lmao sux total!
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 Alstroph
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Date: November 6, 2005 @ 5:11 PM
HAHA! I like the riff.
Intergalactic Rap Hero.
you're awesome!
Love, The Minister of Scissors
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Alstroph
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Date: November 6, 2005 @ 5:12 PM
The solo rocks too
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jewsus
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Date: September 1, 2006 @ 1:49 AM
a welshman rapping....now i've heard everything. i know very little about rap, though i'm happy you put guitar lines in it. i really don't like fake beats and electronic crap. anyway, i got a kick out of it. might not exactly have a future in rap, but i'm sure that's not what you were going for. i'll check out another song, this one was just for fun. i just had to hear you rap.
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